8 March 2011, 05:30 PM | #1 |
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My story...
Malam menyapaku di saat peraduan.,
saat itu pula., aku hanya terdiam, sambil meneteskan air mata, dengan tanpa sepatah kata pun keluar dari kecap., Bulan pun menatapku, dia memperlihatkan cahayanya., Lalu., dia membagi pancarannya., Di saat itu, aku menengadahkan tanganku, dan menatapnya. Namun, kian lama, kian jauh. Entahlah mengapa. Tiba-tiba. Angin penghancuran berhembus di belakang leherku. Ku coba bangun, tetapi, aku diraihnya. Ku coba tangkis, tetapi, aku tak mampu. Ku coba lepaskan, tetapi, aku malah dipeluknya. Kini aku menangis dalam pelukannya. Ku ceritakan perjalanan jauhku., dari kegelapan, menuju temaram. Ku ceritakan., jikalau aku., tak berani menatap cahaya terang., cahaya suci., cahaya abadi., Dia pun hanya membalas, dengan tatapan aneh, dan dengan sejumput senyum di wajah. Aku tak peduli., Aku ingin istirahat., Aku sudah terlalu lelah., ... ... ... Aku, sudah benar-benar lelah... "Yuihiko-chan" |
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bagus sekali karangan ka yuihiko-chan...
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8 March 2011, 06:00 PM | #3 |
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Aaa... `^,^
terimakasih..
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8 March 2011, 06:19 PM | #4 |
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it's very good.......
i like........ |
8 March 2011, 06:25 PM | #5 |
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Thanks lorena....
But, I apologize if there was word's wrong...
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8 March 2011, 06:40 PM | #6 |
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okay.......
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8 March 2011, 06:47 PM | #7 |
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....Ya.. ^,^ ...
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:d ..............................................!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Kenapa ben??
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8 March 2011, 07:31 PM | #10 |
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cuma senyum..
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... Senyum?? ---------- Post added 9 March 2011 at 10:52 AM ---------- Mengharapkan kritik dan saran!!!
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9 March 2011, 12:22 PM | #12 |
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Wah... Bagusnya.. Yui udah lancar pake bahasa indonesia sekarang.. Pdhal baru 3bln di sini... Gak kangen pake bahasa jepang.
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Icha: ini pun saya masih harus belajar dan belajar lagi. Anda tahu sendiri, kalau nilai bahasa saya benar-benar hancur.
---------- Post added 9 March 2011 at 12:33 PM ---------- Tetapi terimakasih atas sanjungannya icha.
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Yui@ senyum = smile
Hmm... Bahasa nya tingkat tinggi nih... Meski udah ku baca berulang2... Aq sulit mencernanya... (Emang makanan... ) Tp, ga tau kenapa aq suka part yg ini " Kini aq menangis dlm pelukannya Q ceritakan perjalanan jauh q Dari kegelapan menuju temaram" Aq juga suka bagian akhirnya... Klo boleh tau, ini ceritanya tentang apa ya?? All thumbs I have is for you... Good job, yui...!!!
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oh, dear.. you captured the angst!!
so fluffy, fluffy angst!! thanks for (ever) sharing.
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