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4 February 2011, 01:12 PM
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tak terkira, ya emang semuanya tak terkira...
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6 February 2011, 12:48 AM
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Oh, cerita...
 Aq suka... Tp, Kayanya kebanyakan 'dan' nya deh... Berlatih terus yah... Aq tunggu karya2 mu selajutnya...
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6 February 2011, 02:00 PM
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i am me, tar kualat loh gak boleh gitu gimana kalo smeua tu alloh sama persiskan ke i am me
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6 February 2011, 11:37 PM
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terlalu banyak kata penghubungnya, jadi ketahuan kalo cuman ngampung di kelas bahasa
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7 February 2011, 01:10 PM
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Loh ko kualat sih? Emang aq ngapain? Aq bener2 ga ngerti... 
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7 February 2011, 01:30 PM
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hidari cerita ukhti bukan, bukan baca sajak
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7 February 2011, 01:44 PM
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Justru itu...
Aq ga ngerti salahku di mana? Aq kan cuma komen ceritanya dy... Aq suka, krn ceritanya bagus... Cuma, kebanyakan pake kata 'dan' (klo istilah mas eLmouzai sih terlalu banyak kata penghubung) Jd, sbnrnya salahku di mna? Mas hidari aq mnta maaf klo aq ada salah kata... Aq bener ga maksud apa2 kok...
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7 February 2011, 07:50 PM
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ha ha ha ngga cuma kiding
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9 February 2011, 02:04 PM
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the good story,,,,,,,
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9 February 2011, 02:33 PM
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mana fb nya riany???
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9 February 2011, 11:01 PM
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kren ya critanya
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10 February 2011, 12:09 PM
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aku menyukainya karena kita punya kesamaan
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10 February 2011, 12:17 PM
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coba cerita juga umi
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9 July 2011, 11:59 AM
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makasih semua buat komen2 nya.
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24 January 2012, 04:30 PM
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