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17 October 2011, 04:34 PM
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Aku, Sosok itu, dan Rintihan Kami
Aku berdiri tepat di hadapan sebuah ruangan
Tercium bau darah segar di dalamnya Terlihat samar sosok yang sedang terpanggang di sana. Ia telah kehilangan setengah potongan tubuhnya, Ia hampir kehilangan harapan untuk bebas. Kehampaan mengelilingi sosok itu Ada rintihan penyesalan di balik wajah pucatnya. Ia menjerit seraya wajahnya dikuliti, Ia meronta seraya kepalanya terpenggal, Dosanya kini menelanjangi dirinya sendiri. Para iblis tertawa melihat sosok itu Sosok yang menjerit, Meronta, Menggelepar, Mati. Kini aku sadar, Mengapa aku merasakan kesakitan yang sama. Sebab ‘sosok itu' adalah aku.
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17 October 2011, 07:54 PM
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Wahhhh...superrr kerennnn...:O
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18 October 2011, 06:52 AM
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wiw..
Ckckck.. Puisi yang mantab!! 4 jempol untuk agan! 
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18 October 2011, 12:41 PM
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aku buatnya enggak serius looh ..  ---------- Post added 18 October 2011 at 12:42 PM ----------
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18 October 2011, 02:56 PM
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 hebatt,,,
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20 October 2011, 03:05 PM
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siipp gan,,,
Terakhir diedit oleh wiro bastian tito; 20 October 2011 @ 03:38 PM. |
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