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Old 4 July 2013, 11:08 AM   #1
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Default Puisi ke-72

GUNUNG DALAM MEMORI JALANG

gunung di depan gunung di belakang
di jalan berbatu berlenggang
lambat tapi pasti gunung-gunung hilang
di belokan tajam gang

ke tumpukan sampah aku mengalihkan pandang
ada deretan kisah yang kembali kukenang
deretan kenangan panjang
satu demi satu lalu lalang dalam memori jalang
sampah kenangan kumasukkan ke lubang
lubang jalang makan kenangan kenyang
aku berjalan pincang sambil menerawang
aku dan kenangan jalang akan bersama masuk lubang

malaikat bertanya padaku dengan garang
malaikat mengiris daging hatiku dengan parang panjang
membantai aku punya tulang dengan gada nan gadang
diiris dipukul berulang-ulang
aku pasrah atas dosaku menyimpan memori jalang
percuma melawan aku tak akan menang

gunung di depan gunung di belakang
berjalan gontai di jembatan simpang
dalam hitam bayang-bayang
menuju petang

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Old 4 July 2013, 11:16 AM   #2
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puisi ke 1 sampe ke 71 nya mana???
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Old 4 July 2013, 11:34 AM   #3
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Kakek baru saja kenal dengan sekolah.org. Belum akrab. Untuk mengunggahnya masih meraba-raba, mencari-cari. Kalau sudah akrab kakek unggah semua dari ke -1 sampai ke 73.
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Old 4 July 2013, 11:44 AM   #4
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kok dipanggil kakek,
ya siap lanjutkan,
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Old 4 July 2013, 11:46 AM   #5
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Ya.. kakek dengan 9 cucu .. umur kakek sudah 68 tahun ....
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Old 4 July 2013, 11:54 AM   #6
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oh maaf kek gak tw,
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Old 4 July 2013, 11:57 AM   #7
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Hahaha .. tidak masalah cucuku ...take it easy ....
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Old 4 July 2013, 12:00 PM   #8
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he... berarti kakek ini satu jaman sama putu wijaya dan taufik ismail yah???
wah hebat nya....
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Old 4 July 2013, 12:08 PM   #9
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Mungkin beda sedikit, dibawah mereka. Ketika kakek mulai senang membaca puisi, kakek sudah membaca karya mereka. Hanya perjuangan kakek tidak segigih mereka. Jadi puisi kakek hanya dinikmati sendiri. Baru beberapa tahun ini kakek merasa ingin eksis (hahahaha), lalu kakek main di dunia maya... dan akhirnya bertemu dengan kamu disini. Hidari ......kakek belum baca karyamu, nanti malam kakek akan baca.

O ya, di www.kompasiana.com/kakekhakimi ada juga artikel kakek, termasuk beberapa puisi yang dimuat disini. Dan ada beberapa ulasan tentang puisi teman ...
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Old 4 July 2013, 01:33 PM   #10
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oh begitu yah kek,
he... pastinya gak sebagus puisi kakek,
ya tadi juga dah di kunjungi ko ke halamannya,
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Old 4 July 2013, 05:37 PM   #11
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Salam kenal kakek Hakimi

Aku suka baca puisi tapi susah nulisnya
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Old 4 July 2013, 09:01 PM   #12
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Default Salam kenal juga ....

Terima kasih atas salam perkenalannya ... tentu saja kakek terima ... semoga kita selalu sehat.
Tentang menulis puisi ... rumusnya gampang ... tulis saja .. dan unggah ... hahaha.
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Old 5 July 2013, 03:04 AM   #13
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tulis nya sesuai pa yang di rasa, dilihat, didengar assha-chan,
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Old 5 July 2013, 05:18 AM   #14
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Buat assha : Awalnya baca-baca tar jg bs nulis coba aja...

Buat hakimi : slmt bergabung dech...slm kenal..
kayaknya menempatkan dr jd senior dech...
wk..wk..wk ( krn nyebut kakek maksudku...xi..xi..xi..)
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Old 5 July 2013, 07:10 AM   #15
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kalo buat hidari ko gak ada intan-chan,
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