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Old 10 April 2011, 07:15 PM   #1
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Simpang Neraka Ujung Derita..


by Gedy Mahardika on Wednesday, February 16, 2011 at 4:03pm

Manusia mulai buta akan alur
Abaikan halang rintang ketentuan-Nya
Suara hati tergantikan jadi nafsu liar
Meraung-raung malam sendu tak bercahaya

Simpang itu neraka
Ujung pada derita
Tak mampu kembali
Ini sudah takdir harga mati

Hina dina saat terpuruk
Hingga kembali jadi tanah
Hati yang menentang arah
Tersungkur jasad hingga busuk


Mohon dikritik kakak-kakak semuanya
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Old 13 April 2011, 08:31 PM   #2
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Originally Posted by Gedy View Post
Simpang Neraka Ujung Derita..


by Gedy Mahardika on Wednesday, February 16, 2011 at 4:03pm

Manusia mulai buta akan alur
Abaikan halang rintang ketentuan-Nya
Suara hati tergantikan jadi nafsu liar
Meraung-raung malam sendu tak bercahaya

Simpang itu neraka
Ujung pada derita
Tak mampu kembali
Ini sudah takdir harga mati

Hina dina saat terpuruk
Hingga kembali jadi tanah
Hati yang menentang arah
Tersungkur jasad hingga busuk


Mohon dikritik kakak-kakak semuanya
kok pada bikin puisi ya
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Old 14 April 2011, 12:59 PM   #3
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bagus sekali kak gedy....salam kenal ya....
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Old 24 April 2011, 12:09 AM   #4
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keren coy..........
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Old 27 April 2011, 04:02 PM   #5
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keren keren,,,,
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