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Old 7 April 2011, 12:52 PM   #1
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Default Dengarlah Sahabatku...

Dulu kebersamaan itu terjalin sempurna...
Indah, lucu dan begitu menyenangkan...
Tapi, mungkin semua itu kini tlah sirna...
Bagaikan karang dihempas sang ombak...
Kau diam seribu bahasa...
Entah itu apa kesalahanku...
Atau mungkin bagimu bersamaku, hanyalah buang-buang waktu...
Ku coba bercermin pada diriku...
Apa aku pernah salah kepadamu?
Ada kata-kata yang menyakitkankah?
Apa disana kau merasa bingung sepertiku?
Dulu ku berfikir, kau adalah seseorang yang selalu ada...
Seseorang yang mengerti arti hatiku...
Tapi mungkin semua itu aku tepiskan...
Karena kini kau berubah...
Aku hanya ingin kau mengerti...
Aku sendiri disini...
Sedangkan kau sibuk dengan duniamu sendiri...
Lebih baik aku pergi...
Hanya kepercumaan yang kumiliki...
Karena kau tak pernah menganggapku ada...
Mungkin kini kau telah menemukan orang yang membuatmu lebih sempurna...
Sedangkan bersamaku, tak ada kesempurnaan itu terjalin...
Tapi kau tak perlu merasa bersalah dengan kata-kataku ini...
Tepuklah pundakku...
Jika kesempurnaan yang kau milikki meninggalkanmu...
Aku masih menunggumu...
SAHABATKU YANG DULU.....
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Old 7 April 2011, 03:16 PM   #2
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bagus bngt pusisinya
bljr dri mna ???
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Old 7 April 2011, 03:21 PM   #3
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hai salam kenal ya..:P
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Old 10 April 2011, 04:56 PM   #4
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Puisinya bagus..
Lanjutkan
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Old 18 April 2011, 04:23 AM   #5
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bagus km siswa mana?
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Old 19 April 2011, 10:56 AM   #6
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baguuuuuuuuuss......
jd inget msa2 skul qu dulu
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Old 26 April 2011, 11:35 AM   #7
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bgus juga puisinya buat lgi donk.....
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Old 26 April 2011, 12:47 PM   #8
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puisinya bagus juga,,,
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Old 26 April 2011, 07:31 PM   #9
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@benny...
ggw benci dya........ntu benci pha.......
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Old 23 May 2011, 03:39 PM   #10
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i like it ..
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Old 7 June 2011, 05:14 PM   #11
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uuaaah,..
puisinya bagus eaa,..
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Old 7 June 2011, 08:51 PM   #12
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bagussss....
bagaimana sih cara mengarang puisi agar menarik?
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Old 25 September 2011, 05:59 PM   #13
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puisinya bagus .,.,.
mar depe makna ta bale"
disitu trus.,.,

lbe bagus klo dia cuman pende mar depe inti ttp dpa lia.,.,
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Old 3 October 2011, 11:00 AM   #14
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wah kui les puisine wes bertahun2 kui, kren2...
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Old 3 October 2011, 07:30 PM   #15
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Bagus..,puitis banget!.Blajar dari mana?.Boleh diajarin gk?
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