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Old 31 May 2013, 11:11 AM   #1
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I will write you away scrub the memories of you from my insides with the magic of words. Already I have cleaned you away from my outsides. Soap and scalding water burning you away from me and I hang myself to dry in the heat of the sun. And letting the wind take the scent of you sway from me.

And now, all that is left to cleanse is my insides where soap and desperate hands cannot reach and wash. So I write you away with every phrase, every word, every poem that I send you away from me. Let the remnants of you that remain within me off into the world,

following your footsteps, write until the habits the memories, the emotions That are connected to you are cut loose and set free. I shall paint a picture of you with my words, with every kiss of the brush and canvas with each stroke, I shall paint the image of you remove it from within me and never look upon it again.

I shall write what you were to me what you meant to me, what you made me feel until the words don’t make sense I shall write and write and write. Write you away turn pages black with ink and clear my soul of you write until you are...... gone.
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Old 3 June 2013, 07:33 AM   #2
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why hidari-san? why? (yeah, it is so dramatic )

you don't need to write her away, actually.
it'll only make your pages get more dirty.

she won't be gone that way.
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Old 4 June 2013, 09:32 AM   #4
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jangan kebanyakan senyum hidari-san
satu aja cukup
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Old 4 June 2013, 09:44 AM   #5
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kalo satu ntar ada notif pemberitahuan
harus 10 karakter atau lebih, gkgkgggkgkkg
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Old 4 June 2013, 11:01 AM   #6
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kahkahkahkahkahkahkah....
lagian iseng banget komentar satu senyum
ga niat komen banget.
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ya makanya banyak juga biar keliatan niat,
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jiah... itu mah, tambah keliatan gak niatnya.
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klo ga niat mah gak bakalan reply, he.....
bener gak??? he...
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bener sih...
tapi, aku pernah ga komen walaupun sudah berniat
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tu mah males aja I am ME-kun nya
gkgggkggkgk....
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hahaha.... tau ajah
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ya tau atuh
itu penyakit sejuta umat,
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pengalaman apa emang keseringan begitu nih hidari-san?
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tapi hidari punya doa buat ga males,
jadi hidari gak pernah males lagi,
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