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Old 26 December 2010, 01:06 PM   #1
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Unhappy just for share my short story

Hah, saya tidak pernah mengerti
saya biasanya bisa menyelesaikan problem orang dalam masalah cinta, or whatever all about that. Tapi saat saya merasakannya sendiri, speechless yah tanpa kata. Melirik pada problemnya saja tidak.
Haduh tolong saya, haruskah saya melanjutkannya kacaunya adukan ini. Mengertikah kamu saat kekosongan dan bingung menyergap saya. Akankah kamu fahami saya tak mengerti jalan fikiran saya sendiri.


Sadarkah kamu, saat kamu cercah tanya itu saya bingung merespon apa?. Saya tidak mengerti dengan jalan saya serta langkah saya sendiri. Jelaskah semua yang telah saya sketsa dengan buram. Kamu bermakna sebelum atau tanpa kamu bertanya itu, saat kamu cercah sedemikian waktu, sakit itu ada. Dengan ketidak percayaanmu itu wajar tapi salahkah jika saya merasa sesak disini. Namun rasa tercekiknya saya suliat untuk dimaknai. Saya terlalu malu tampakan silatnya cerminan saya, tapi saya berusaha sebaik yang saya bisa. Perih saat kau sikatkan cercah itu. Mungkin aku tahu, ini singkat dalam nalarnya tapi setidaknya fahamilah saat bicaranya sang suara. Ini biasa saja sebenarnya, tapi akukan pemula tolonglah picikan matamu…
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Old 29 December 2010, 07:48 AM   #2
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i don't really know what are you talking about, sistaaa
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Old 29 December 2010, 10:35 PM   #3
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Yes, a short story that raises many interpretations
I was confused to share it
so, I vaguely story with the words "you" create a second character for me
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Old 14 February 2011, 10:56 AM   #4
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hm... km satu orang dg kepribadian ganda kah?
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Old 8 June 2011, 08:29 AM   #5
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Jika kamu memang sering memberi solusi to other people. So, i think u've to try how the way, you were help the other people. Mungkin dengan sedikit calm, layaknya kamu memberi solusi. Dan jangan, simpan masalah itu sendirikan. Tanyakanlah kepada orang yang kamu percaya bisa.
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Old 8 June 2011, 07:46 PM   #6
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wah keliatannya udah lama banget nie thread...tapi salam kenal ya..
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Old 8 June 2011, 11:09 PM   #7
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O..iya ben,, aku tidak tahu kalau ini thread lama. Tadi siang, saya mengangkatnya dari laman ke-4.
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Old 9 June 2011, 08:38 AM   #8
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Originally Posted by Yuihiko-Seia View Post
O..iya ben,, aku tidak tahu kalau ini thread lama. Tadi siang, saya mengangkatnya dari laman ke-4.
ohh,begitu...
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Old 9 June 2011, 09:44 AM   #9
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Maaf..maaf..
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Old 9 June 2011, 11:18 AM   #10
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Originally Posted by Yuihiko-Seia View Post
Maaf..maaf..
maaf kenapa kak yui??
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Old 9 June 2011, 11:42 AM   #11
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Lupa, maaf karena apa?
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Old 10 June 2011, 11:47 PM   #12
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Lupa, maaf karena apa?

hahaha,,,,, senpai ama benny bisa ajah nih
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Old 11 June 2011, 01:18 AM   #13
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Kami adalah pelawak... Maaf.. Maaf.. Apabila tidak lucu...
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Old 11 June 2011, 11:26 AM   #14
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hehehe.hanya itu saja.....!!
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Old 11 June 2011, 12:30 PM   #15
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ka saya minta info mngenai cerpen yang baik, serta contoh.a...................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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