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#16 |
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Bergabung: Feb 2011
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tak terkira, ya emang semuanya tak terkira...
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#17 |
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Bergabung: Jan 2011
Location: The World of ME
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Oh, cerita...
![]() Aq suka... Tp, Kayanya kebanyakan 'dan' nya deh... Berlatih terus yah... Aq tunggu karya2 mu selajutnya...
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#18 |
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Bergabung: Feb 2011
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i am me, tar kualat loh gak boleh gitu gimana kalo smeua tu alloh sama persiskan ke i am me
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#19 |
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Bergabung: Feb 2011
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terlalu banyak kata penghubungnya, jadi ketahuan kalo cuman ngampung di kelas bahasa
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#20 |
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Bergabung: Jan 2011
Location: The World of ME
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#21 |
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Bergabung: Feb 2011
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hidari cerita ukhti bukan, bukan baca sajak
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#22 |
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Bergabung: Jan 2011
Location: The World of ME
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Justru itu...
Aq ga ngerti salahku di mana? Aq kan cuma komen ceritanya dy... Aq suka, krn ceritanya bagus... Cuma, kebanyakan pake kata 'dan' (klo istilah mas eLmouzai sih terlalu banyak kata penghubung) Jd, sbnrnya salahku di mna? Mas hidari aq mnta maaf klo aq ada salah kata... Aq bener ga maksud apa2 kok... ![]() |
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#23 |
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Bergabung: Feb 2011
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ha ha ha ngga cuma kiding
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#24 |
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Bergabung: Feb 2011
Posts: 6
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the good story,,,,,,,
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#25 |
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Bergabung: Feb 2011
Posts: 156
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mana fb nya riany???
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#26 |
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Bergabung: Feb 2011
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#27 |
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Bergabung: Feb 2011
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aku menyukainya karena kita punya kesamaan
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#28 |
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Bergabung: Feb 2011
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coba cerita juga umi
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#29 |
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Bergabung: Nov 2010
Location: bandung
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makasih semua buat komen2 nya.
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#30 |
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Location: bandung
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